The following examples of my writing illustrate the progress i have made throughout the semester. They have all been expanded and better explained through out.There was much I learned this semester about passive tense, sentence structure, proper topic sentences, truthfully I could keep going on. The following posts have been corrected to include all those things and much more. I have gone over them again and again to make sure they fully express the skills i have attained throughout this semester. I hope you enjoy them.